Doha 12

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Cover art by Damonza

Jake Eldar’s and Miriam Schaffer’s names may kill them.

Jake manages a bookstore in Brooklyn. Miriam is a secretary at a Philadelphia law firm. Both grew up in Israel and emigrated to build new lives in America. Neither knows the other exists…until the Israeli intelligence agency Mossad uses their identities in an operation to assassinate a high-ranking Hezbollah commander in Doha, Qatar.

Now Hezbollah plans to kill them both.

Jake, Miriam and ten other innocents in five countries – the Doha 12 – awake to find their identities stolen and their lives caught between Mossad and Hezbollah in an international game of murder and reprisal. Jake stumbles upon Hezbollah’s plot but can’t convince the police it exists. When his wife is murdered in a botched hit meant for him, Jake and Miriam try desperately to outrun and outfight their pursuers while shielding Jake’s young daughter from the killers on their trail.

Hezbollah, however, has a fallback plan: hundreds of people will die if Jake and Miriam survive.

Inspired by actual events, Doha 12 will sweep you from the suburbs of Beirut and Tel Aviv to a pulse-pounding climax in the wintry streets of Manhattan as Jake and Miriam race along the thin, faded gray line between good and bad, hero and villain, truth and lies.

What the Reviewers Say

Doha 12 is an exciting and hard-to-put-down read of fiction, not to be overlooked.” — Midwest Book Review Small Press Bookwatch

Doha 12 is a “…breathtaking cat and mouse pursuit…an action-packed thriller in which one exciting climax follows another.” — Ellis Shuman, The Times of Israel

Doha 12 will have you riveted from beginning to end…Mr. Charnes has beaten James Patterson in all categories…be one of the first discoverers of an exceptional writer.” — Seeley James, author of The Geneva Decision

“The story is totally compelling and believable, but the thing that makes this thriller stand out is that — unlike many others in this genre — Doha 12 has heart…” — William Davis, author of Black Karma

“Fast-paced action-packed psychological thriller that takes the reader on an emotional journey across the globe. I would love to read more…” — Juniper Grove

“It’s not often I read a suspenseful thriller that is also realistic and thought-provoking. The main characters are believable, interesting, and even the good guys have faults and make mistakes…” — Mickey Hoffman, author of Deadly Traffic

“This is an exceptionally assured, polished, powerful and insightful work of fiction…if it had been published by Big Publishing, I believe it would have been a best seller!” — Girls with Guns

Download the first five chapters of Doha 12 -or- preview it in the Kindle reader.

Bonus material: extra chapters and a conversation with the author.


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Don’t Make Her Mad, Middle East Edition

Maj Mariam al-Mansouri (graphic:

We’re used to seeing the Islamic world’s women as victims. From old-fashioned discrimination to rape, torture, mutilation and murder, it’s tough having two X chromosomes in some of the more regressive Moslem states, especially in the Middle East. But in the developing long war against the Daesh (or ISIS or IS or ISIL, take your pick), we’re seeing a quiet new narrative that Doha 12’s Miriam heartily approves of: women fighting back.

Exhibit A is Mariam al-Mansouri, a major in the United Arab Emirates Air Force, who on 22 September 2014 led (!) Gulf State airstrikes against the Daesh in Syria’s Idlib, Aleppo and Raqqa provinces. An F-16 pilot since graduating from Khalifa bin Zayed Air College in 2007, the Abu Dhabi native has said she’d dreamed of being a fighter pilot for years before women were allowed to enter flight training.

Maj Mariam al-Mansouri (photo: Telegraph)

While the Emiratis aren’t nearly as ideologically hard-over as their neighbors – we won’t see a Saudi female fighter pilot anytime this century, given that their women aren’t allowed to drive or even leave the house without a male relative – the UAE isn’t exactly a feminist paradise. It’s still perfectly okay for a man to beat his wife and children to “discipline” them, there are no laws against marital rape, and numerous women (including some Westerners) have been jailed for committing extramarital sex after reporting rapes. But that the Emiratis even considered having a modern, well-spoken woman as the face of their air offensive shows that green shoots can grow in even the stoniest ground.

Besides, we Yanks don’t have much room to feel superior: Jeannie Leavitt, the USAF’s first female fighter pilot, didn’t get to climb into her first F-15 cockpit until 1993.

Even more remarkable is a feature of the ground war against the Daesh: female peshmerga.

The top third of Iraq has been an autonomous Kurdish nation since Saddam’s fall in 2003, with its own government, schools, military, and, crucially, oil. Until the Daesh came on the scene, Kurdistan was the most peaceful part of Iraq. However, this calm is a recent development; the Kurds fought not only a bitter civil war in the 1990s, but also a decades-long guerrilla war against Iraqi security forces while Saddam tried to wipe them out.

The Kurds learned what other nations (USSR, 1941; Israel, 1948) have: when your back’s against the wall, you can’t afford to waste resources, including those women who want to fight for the nation. As a result, Kurdish women have been in combat since at least the 1970s.

Women of 2BN, 6BDE (photo: Vocativ)

Second Battalion, Sixth Brigade is a 600-strong, all-female infantry unit in what’s essentially the Kurdish Army. Established in 1996, 2BN has served rotations along the 650-mile front the peshmerga hold against the Daesh. Like other Kurdish solders, the women of 2BN also staff checkpoints, train, and fill other non-combat roles. But the unit fought against Ansar-al-Sunnah in 2002, in the 2003 operation clearing the Iraqi Army out of Iraqi Kurdistan, and at least a platoon of female soldiers were on the front line of the September peshmerga counteroffensive against the Daesh in northern Iraq’s Daquq district, supported by U.S. and allied airpower.

Senior officers in the battalion are veterans of the fight against Saddam Hussein in the 1970s and 1980s. The female soldiers go through the same training as the men, share a base, and are paid the same as their male counterparts. And on 11 October, Rangin Hamlawa showed that the women can die like the men; she was killed in a mortar attack near Kirkuk while fighting the Daesh, the first member of 2BN to die in battle.

Female Kurdish fighter with heavy machinegun

YPJ fighters in Syria (photo: Yann Renoult)

Female fighters don’t exist only in the formal Kurdish armed forces. Two major guerilla groups – the Kurdistan Worker’s Party (PKK), banned in Turkey and listed as a terrorist organization, and its Syrian counterpart, the People’s Protection Units (YPG) – maintain armed militias. Up to 40% of their members may be women. Female YPG partisans (the YPJ) fought in the recent liberation of Kobani (see the video).

Like the UAE, Kurdistan isn’t a paradise of female equality. Some women wear niqab (aka burqas), and honor killings are enough of a problem that 2BN runs a network of safe houses for women at risk. It’s hard telling what would happen to 2BN if Kurdistan turned into Switzerland; both the Soviets and Israelis took their women off the front lines after their moments of crisis passed.

Still, it’ll be hard to shove Kurdish women back into a box. 2BN is limited to 600 soldiers, but more women come by their base to volunteer every day, and some go through training and head for the front as part of militias. I’d like to see some guy try to tell them they can’t drive by themselves.

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